Jul 9, 2010

Mikael's Umbrella: Chapter 1

The rain was pouring on the dark London street. People with umbrellas hoisted over their heads splashed around, eager to get to their next location. Cars had their blinding headlights on. Mikael stared dismally out from under his own umbrella and wrapped his light sweater around his shivering body. He peered around the rainy city square. No one else seemed to be having the same temperature problem. But then again, no one else had worn only a light sweater, T-shirt, and shorts.
Mikael passed by Amete Filming Studio. He usually liked to sneak a look in the window, to see what movie was currently being filmed.Today was different. It was as cold as being stuck in the freezer, Mikael thought, taking a quick look in the restaurant next door.
The noise of pop music magnified 100 times awakened him to his senses. A sleek panther-black limousine was cruising by, stop-sign-sized speakers pumping out rhythms. It stopped right in front of Amete Filming Studio. Curious, Mikael joined the queue of people crowding around the sparkling doors. "Back, back," he heard someone say, and then the doors opened.


9 comments:

Nibor said...

So excited about the new series (that part sounds familiar...) and the contest! I'll start working on my entry. Can we enter more than one title?

mom-mom said...

I love it so far! Your descriptions are wonderful! I also would like to know if we can enter more than one title.
When you are a famous author, Nory, I want an autographed copy of every book!

My title is: Mikaele's Finale

John Packel said...

Nory, this is a tough assignment as we don't know where the story is going. Do you? I'll do my best.

John Packel said...

OK, I'm ready to take a shot at a title. First, do you realize the Amete is an anagram for "me eat." Is that intentional? Will this be a story about cannibals. Nah, probably not!

My title is:

"THE NIGHT OF DEATHLY DARKNESS."

E.C.J. said...

I love the story, but I'm just not very good at thinking of names. Once again, can we pick more than one? I'm still thinking.

owlarrabee said...

Nory - Your grandfather sent us the link to your new story - Don't know yet where it's going, but so far let's call it "Mikaele's Umbrella".
Owen & Melissa

Katie said...

My title suggestion is "Secret Breakfast."

Nory said...

Yes, you may enter more than one title, as long as they are different and different from everyone else's. Also--"Secret Breakfast" is an interesting name. Why did you choose that?

Nibor said...

Here are my entries:

1. London Fog

2. A Dark Window

3. The Glitter of the Rain

I think that's it for now.